Editor Wanted

So I’m about 9 pages into my first big story. 

VoidGolem provided me with an original outline, and I’ve been going all in on it for the last couple of weeks.

It’s proving to be much more involved than planned, and I suck at self-editing anything longer than a couple of paragraphs.

If there are any readers out there that feel up to wading through my rough draft, send me a message and I’ll share the Google Doc link for viewing and commenting.

Note: This story is F2F bimbo/stepford transformation, with a heavy Asian stereotype. Most of what I have is set up, with hints of transformation and a short hypnosis scene near the end.

Image originally by ZKO, unrelated but hot.

Just a quick FYI for the more prolific readers:

As @duncanspykid mentioned in the reply, I’m also posting my longer stories on Erotic Mind Control Story Archive (mcstories.com).

Just like I keep my content loosely separate on Tumblr between @800milesisadrive and @thisisalljustkink, my ‘published’ stories are on EMCSA under the pen name Rev. Hale.

I’ve also had a few good samaritans reach out, thinking someone had stolen my work here and posted it elsewhere. Hopefully this will clear up any confusion!